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Chain me
I will be mad
Push me
I will bite
Hit me
I will kill
Cage me
I will fight

Don't force me
With strength and power
Because I will go wild
And I will rebel
And I will not stop
Until you fall

But treat me nicely
Hold me gently
Caress me with love
And I will be
Your loyal dog
I will protect you
I will listen to you
And I will not stop
Until I fall
I suddenly realized that I really resemble a dog. Yes, A DOG. Even one of my friends ever treated me like a dog (like, asking for my hand, and when I really put my hand over his hand, he patted my head and said "good girl, good girl" as if I were a real dog).

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lildreamer6281 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
I Love this poem. May I share it on my Facebook? I will tag you.
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cynara77 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you~ I feel flattered. But I prefer for you not to share it in facebook, sorry ^^;
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lildreamer6281 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
no problem. i enjoy reading them here.
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AnayaDeath Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This deviation was featured in the third issue of The Black Cat ([link]).

Please show it to your friends and watchers to give yourself and the magazine more exposure. :)

Thanks in advance! :w00t:
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AnayaDeath Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcircleplz: Hello! I am making a new web magazine about the DeviantArt community. It will be featured only on dA and I won’t sell it – it will be a free read for anyone who is interested.

I want to include a little feature and your poem is exactly what I look for. Can I please have your permission to feature it?

I am talking about the next issue of The Black Cat magazine. You can look through the latest issue here: [link]
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cynara77 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, you have my permission :3
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AngelOfLight999 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2011
really nice
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HikarisLicht Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so true...
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gridbugs Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Very true. I really love the last lines. Reminds me of a few dogs I've had.
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coolkatie24 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
I really like it.
it makes me think of my relationship with my parents...[link]
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